The Horse 2021/22

Environment & Technology

Best practice examples of comment writing

1) Paper production through hemp – an alternative?
https://dontwastemy.energy/2018/05/28/paperproduciton-through-hemp-alternative=>First comment and also some of the followings, there is almost a little discussion here

2) A night without a roof
https://dontwastemy.energy/2018/05/31/a-night-without-a-roof
=>the comment from Flavio is very engaged, did some research, etc.

3) Airplane Food facts
https://dontwastemy.energy/2020/01/08/airplane-food-facts

=>Some features or characteristics (Merkmale, Eigenschaften) that could give a comment more "power" are:

  • additional information, facts
  • new aspects
  • in general: constructive critics
  • it comes to the matter
  • what you learned
  • your consequences (or actions)
  • your reasoned opinion (deine begründete Meinung)
  • showing empathy (Mit- oder Einfühlungsvermögen)
  • justified compliments
  • interesting weblinks
  • ... and more