In the lesson of april 1st, 2022 we will ask two people from the class to look at it.
Update:
Vanessa Nauer (Sandrina's sister) and Murisa Murtic (Emina's sister) have rated our text on basis of checklist for dontwastemy.energy. it showed us that we could still name our collabration partners , make a glossary and specify our laboratory request in process. the title should be looked at again.